Date: 11/08/2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God, why is this the only thing you've written? It's beautiful. Painful, and heartbreaking, because you know from the very first that Jim doesn't realise what Spock is saying - I cried so hard it took me three tries to finish reading it! But you use language so wonderfully, so evocatively - it was such a pleasure to read. Thank you.
Date: 09/09/2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Spock;s pain really rboke my heart but I must confess his character is quite weak in this story and he is simply and very strong one in my mind so I find it kind of hard to believe that he would be fooled this easily or react in such a weak way and also Jim...he can't be this stupid,can he? And I don't think it's possible for someone to completely miss everything for months and confess love in a few minutes later after he finds out.I'm just saying this as my personal opinion and because you are a great author that I wish to see more works from and I think I must give my honest opinion.Thank you for sharing your story.
Date: 04/09/2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
(bursts out laughing) the pool of McCoy and Scotty killed me! Just great, here's a brilliant idea: Is details they do not want I can get? And not save!
Now I understand why they call this genre "Angst"
I really feel symptoms of a panic attack! I was scared!
Date: 07/18/2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG this was this was excrutiating to read. You know like a train wreck in the making, and you know it's headed for a fiery desaster, and you just. can't. look. away! And at the same time Spock's thoughts are so sweet, his happiness and joy at being with Jim... *sighs happily*. The crew's various blessings made me smile.
Thank god, Jim bought a clue. :) I love the ending. Thank you!
Date: 12/23/2009 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
aw, this was so sweet and painful. loved it!
Date: 10/21/2009 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Reading this is like watching a train crash in progress -- you know what's going to happen but you just can't tear your eyes away. I can't believe it really got that far with Kirk so clueless...He was totally not reading the signs at all. But having everyone be upset at him for it, seem a little much since it really wasn't his fault. But despite that, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was pretty hilarious up to the point where Spock's heart got broken though...
Date: 07/25/2009 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the writing in this story, it was thoughtful and clever, and it had depth and richness. I loved the way Jim captured Spock's interest and how Uhura came to accept how Spock was feeling -- that was beautifully and sensitvely handled.
For the first half of the story, I found myself cringeing at times because Jim wasn't seeing what was happening. I can totally go for Kirk not realising his own feelings and burying them until something dramatic brings them to the surface, and I can also believe that Spock's affections would be subtle.
I began to have difficulty in the latter part of the story when everyone could clearly see what happening except Jim (who we're told in the movie is a 'genius'), and none of his crew/friends overtly spoke to him about it. I also see Spock as a strong character and found his complete collapse at the end hard to imagine.
While the conclusion of this particular story didn't work for me, I truly hope we see more from this author.