Date: 03/25/2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like that you got them set up so that Kirk was directing the whole thing. McCoy is just the right side of willing but squicked. And just to show that I've read this a shameful number of times, I happened to find two typos.
[that hobgoblin better accepts this offer] *accept
[idle stroking the scratched skin] *idly