Date: 07/13/2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
When you listed "humor" You mean it seriously!
When Kirk came with a "clincher" to Spock, I slapped my hands on my face and shouted, "Oh my God!"
When You described Spock on the table, I saw "that view" before me and I started drooled.
And when you continuation describe their lovemaking,a delight shivers ran through me.
It's after midnight now, so it's making you're writing a wonderful bedtime story that I hope will bring me good dreams like that.
Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 05/01/2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have seriously lost track of how many times I have read and re-read this story! Your writing excels both in characterization and plot development and when I read this story I felt as if an actual episode of TOS was unfolding before me, albeit slightly different than the TOS I watched with my dad when I was a kid (*giggle*). I can safely say that out of all the KS fanfics I've read, this one has the definitive Bones character--he really steals the show :) Although I am sitting at a computer typing this review, know that I am giving you a standing ovation in my mind. Well done!
Date: 10/30/2009 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was wonderful. It was like watching an episode unfold in front of your eyes. Even the sex scene with Jim and Spock. it was so real in my mind. fucking hot...great job..and your McCoy...god i just see De Kelley..
thank you! I love writing McCoy and I'm really glad it worked for you :-)