Date: 08/05/2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Is this whole chapter a flashback? I like it. Always good to do the old TOS thing. Feel so sad that Kirk feels like he can't put an arm around Spock to comfort them both.
Hi, Hypatia. Yes this chapter is a flashback as well as the last four (or five). It will eventually tie in to events later on. Thanks for your comment :)
Date: 08/05/2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
So happy you updated. Spock is so very possessive of Jim. He would do anything to protect Jim...If Spock hadn't come when he did...what would have happened...and what will happen when Spock awakes.
Update when you can...
Yes, Spock is protective but something is definately amiss.
Date: 08/05/2013 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow! I just found you and I love this story. So glad to see an update and I can't wait for more! Really enjoy your writing!! Keep up the great work, your new fan, PattyLou
Thank you. I'm happy you're enjoying it.
Date: 01/31/2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
I always read the chapter before, to remember what happened. Kyros...such a mean bastard, wanting Jim like that. He belongs to Spock...Spock being on the hunt for his bondmate was well done. I am not surprised he is acting in this way, the frustration of not finding Jim is overwhelming him, What will happen when he does find Jim..will he lose it completely, Thanks for the update...
Thanks for your review Denise. Yes, Spock is not himself on searching for Jim but there is something deeper going on here. It will all tie in eventually.
Date: 01/31/2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
you're back! yaye! liked the chapter, very dramatic. that tile thing was so out there I was surprised Spock didn't test it to see if it opened a secret passageway or something. It was really bothering me!
Hello there! Very observant about the tile. There's more to it than meets the eye and it will come into play later on. Thanks for your review.
Date: 10/08/2012 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
This was great my friend...Love how you describe the crystals. Jim had a eerie feeling that this guy was trouble, and he was right. I look forward to seeing what will happen...hopefully Spock will save him.
Wish my muse would come back to me....
Thank you. A hint about Kyros is that things aren't always as they seem. The crystals are a clue.
Date: 10/08/2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Just read chapters one though twelve and am sitting here thinking...."SPOCK!" and there's NO NEXT BUTTON.
Which all means, by the way, that I think this story is absolutely brill.
(Blushes) Thank you so much. I'll get the next chapter up ASAP.
Date: 07/06/2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Welcome back! I'm so glad that the slash fairy decided to sprinkle some muse dust on this story again. It is so richly layered and true to character. Thanks for the update :)
You're welcome and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/30/2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
This story is pulling on my heartstrings! There are so many twists and turns! I'm dying to know what's next! Our poor Spock and Jim! Is the universe ever satisfied with them?
Thank you for your review! Don't worry though; I'll stop torturing them...eventually.
Date: 06/30/2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was so well written. What I love about your stories is that you dig deep in what we know of Vulcans, which isn't a whole lot. But, you manage to make us think..more specifically the bonding ceremony. That getting interrupted here and there when they desperately need each other is a no no. All the mystery of telepathy is such an intriguing topic to discuss. You again manage to make us stop and think, now imagine if they always had this power....and have emotions..violent emotions mixed in, when things don't go their way. What a horrendous thought. The power the could unleash, just by thinking..I don't like you....because...what..you made a pass at my husband...he gave you the evil eye. Thank the heavens for Surak's vision of what could happen, and that he had other people follow him. Very scared for Spock at this moment. Now, I inderstand why he went to Gol...something real real bad is about to happen, and the thing feared most from Vulcans is the lost of control. He is about to experience it, now.... Excellent chapter Kelli.
Thank you sweetie. Yes, I never really read into anything which went into Vulcan telepathy, either in fanfiction or in official books. It opens a lot of doors of speculation. As for Spock going to Gol, I think the readers have it figured out that's what is going to happen, so I'm not spoiling anything by saying yes he will be going there. But as you will find out later in the story, the reason why he goes...well lets just say that all is not what it seems.
Date: 05/20/2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow! Very good storyline! Well-written.
Will you continue? I really hope so! I want to know what happens! (Inquiring minds, you know.)
I haven't given up on this...I just got really side tracked with personal things. Mostly working while going to school to complete my degree, which I just completed. So I will be working on this and my other neglected WIP soon. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08/21/2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful depiction of the intimacy Jim and Spock had before the events of the story. The trust and affection between them was such a nice contrast from the heartache and cconfusion of the main storyline. I am interested to see how the flashback will tie in with the rest of the fic...I don't have a hot clue where you're going wiith it, but you're awesome, so I know it's gonna be great. You are doing a fabulous job with this story.
Well I don't have a hot clue either....lol j/k ;) As how it will tie in, I'll give you a hint. One is back in chapter 5, The end of chapter nine, and what will occur in chapter 11 all tie together. Thanks for your review!