Date: 06/18/2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
Sooooo...it is me again! And I was kind of wondering if maybe you would possibly finish this one too? PLEASE!!!
I love your work! And this one needs to be finished. I am on bended knee! (Okay -actually I am on my chubby rump but METAPHORICALLY I am on bended knee!)
Date: 04/06/2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet Jesus!! PLEASE FINISH THIS! You are so talented and it is driving me nuts that you have not finished this piece!
Do not make me crazier than I already am.
You are very kind. I will see if my muse will wake up from her slumber. Thanks for the comments.
Date: 04/23/2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
I just took time to reread this story again because I just so love it and I am anxiously awaiting to see what Sarek needs to discuss with Amanda about Spock. I think he may have found you that T'Pring has cheated on Spock and just very well may be pregnant now. I do not know where your direction may be going on this story but what ever it may be just PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE your wonderful story that you have started here. I as well have loved your work and always look for anything new that you publish. I just hope that soon we will see more of this story. I wish for you to have an ocean full of inspiration for all of your stories.
Date: 09/18/2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope hope hope you are working on this one! I have enjoyed it so much and am on edge to see what Spock's parents need to discuss. WHat will happen with Jim and Spock and whether Bones will ever get a decent nights sleep again.
I have enjoyed so much of your work and want to strongly encourage you to finish this. (Saying "shove you hard into a chair and duct tape a pen to your hand" just does not seem to convey the same loving message as "strongly encourage.")
Please! For the love of my sanity and I am sure several other followers-FINISH THIS!!
It is a great story!
Well, I guess I have no choice now. LOL..Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I will do my best to update. You made my day...
Date: 07/12/2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh just what is Sarek wishing to speak to Amanda about in regards to their son. Is it rumors of what is happening with T'Pring or maybe whispers of why she would like to break their bond because she knows how Spock feels about his Captain. I wonder but guess will have to patiently wait for the next update. :( :)
Date: 03/26/2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
*looking around frantically*
Huh? Wait. What?
WHERE is the rest of the story????
You won`t believe this, but I was thinking of updating, but I fell asleep. Thanks so much for checking this story out. This is when I wrote longer chapters, now I just can`t seem to continue the trend. It`s really driving me nuts. The thing is, the next chapter is with Sarek and Amanda, and I am having a hard time finding their voices. Wish me luck.
Date: 01/12/2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter! Why can't Jim admit to himself how he feels? Even McCoy is willing to talk about it openly but Jim just can't deal with that... And Bones is probably right that if Jim jumps Spock then that could ruin everything. You're right - isn't life complicated...
Ooer! Want more!
Author's Response: Thanks my friend, for the kind review. I am thinking of writing a scene now with Amanda and Sarek. So, wish me luck in that direction....first time writing for them.
Date: 01/12/2012 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Your prose is your best medium, this story of. Restrained Jim acting with maturity is really interesting read. I especially like that Bones has not got Jim. Have got some idea where this may end and it's not good Look forward to update
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. It is not good, and far from over.
Date: 12/31/2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aaaaand I've got to the last chapter - oh noes! I'm glad that Jim didn't screw up and make Spock feel worse as I thought he might have done. But I must say, I am somewhat surprised with how frank their conversation was - I thought it would be more awkward than that! Then again, they are the best of friends...
One minor point of grammar: you can say either 'he himself had gone there often' or 'he himself went there often', but not 'he himself had went there often' - dunno whether that's just a typo or an honest mistake but you might want to change it :) I would say 'had gone', personally.
Well done - I'm loving this story! Glad I finally got round to reading it :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, for the lovely reviews, hope you enjoy the latest one.
Date: 12/31/2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, this is really fascinating - I am so looking forward to getting to the bottom of this! And I'm certainly enjoying seeing McCoy and Spock working together so nicely, despite it being under difficult circumstances. But I do get a sense of dooooooom coming...
Date: 12/31/2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ah haaa! So Doctor McCoy is being kinder and taking an interest now - I knew he would! He does love Spock very much in his... own way... and would naturally have medical curiosity about this phenomenon. So what is happening in Spock's nightmares then? What is causing them? Onwards...
Oh and by the way, Detective Inspector Grammar has nothing to report ;)
Date: 12/31/2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ahh, a very complex chapter. So many emotions, with different reasons for them and different motivations... And it's rather dark, all the stuff about Spock's childhood and particularly T'Pring. But also heartwarming, because Jim would do so much for his friendship with Spock - even though he feels hurt and betrayed he still loves him and cares about his predicament... Now, how is Spock going to cope with his nightmares et cetera? That is scary, how Jim's laugh has turned from kind happiness into twisted hatred...
Date: 12/31/2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Soooo... what is going to happen when Kirk and Spock have their talk, I wonder? I doubt it will be as easy as all that!
It's a nice little first chapter you've got here - it rolls along smoothly and the characters' voices are just spot on! Well done :)
Date: 12/19/2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Jim and Spock. They both want some much to be together and have everything be simple for them, but it is never that easy. I love how you are portraying Spock in this. One can really get a feel for what he is going through. Dealing with something like this would be very hard on him. Great job I look forward to the next update.
Date: 11/30/2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Relationships are so difficult to understand, and enjoy. You've done a very good job here of conveying just how arduous it must be for someone like Spock to come to terms with that complexity. Very insightful, as always!