Date: 12/06/2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
That is certainly a pretty flower! I wonder what its effects on Jim are. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I agree. Very pretty. Jim and his allergies. He can't win. Plus he's missing the ride to sickbay. Poor guy. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 10/29/2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
More good angst. Kirk has a lot to learn about relationships. But will be be able to change? Or is his poor opinion of himself so deeply rooted that he cannot? I am looking forward immensely to seeing how you resolve these questions.
Date: 10/29/2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love the way you are weaving the issue of Kirk's not wanting to commit to anyone into the story of his pursuit of Spock. Kirk may think he wants just to get laid with Spock but I am willing to bet he will find he wants more.