Date: 12/24/2012 11:38 AM Title: Facing Hard Truths
I'm really enjoying this story - more please!!!
:)
Date: 05/08/2012 11:28 AM Title: Facing Hard Truths
And a milkshake for you, too!
Good that things are on a somewhat more even keel. Bets on how long that will last?
Author's Response:
Not long
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2012 12:00 PM Title: Facing Hard Truths
Loved this chapter! Loved Spock in this chapter! Loved that Spock told Zelania she would never be in Federation custody and about the time he stole the Enterprise!
Thank you so much for updating!
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2012 5:03 AM Title: Prologue
Thank God ,you post two chapters at once. I was real scared as Spock blamed Kirk.
Date: 05/07/2012 5:00 AM Title: Facing Hard Truths
Yay; family sorting things out-love that Spock can be so humble when faced with his own obstinacy.
Date: 05/07/2012 12:44 AM Title: Facing Hard Truths
I like this story. It's exciting.
Also, I'm glad Spock's come up with some important conclusions finally and is trying to work with his daughter. I hope they have a little time to build something before you throw the next hurdle.
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2012 12:23 AM Title: Facing Hard Truths
Nice job. I really enjoyed this chapter. Good forward motion.
Date: 05/06/2012 8:53 PM Title: Facing Hard Truths
Very good. GLad Jim and Spock are OK and that Spock admits he was a crappy dad.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2012 12:18 PM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
This was sad and terrible and beautiful. Jim was all heart - I love him for it.
But oh please, when will Spock finally behave like a dad to Zelania? I wanted to kick him. And yes, I understand his insecurities somewhat but still - no excuse to behave like a d..k. (Sorry).
Author's Response:
He'll get better--eventually.
Date: 04/30/2012 5:53 AM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
Glad you're back on this story!
What happened to Zelania--you described that all too well.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2012 5:06 AM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
This is not stringing together which from past CMM suggests a plot twist on the horizon which will send us into a spin. We have not yet seen Spock deal with the secret he shared with zelania's mother or his guilt in failing realise the consequences of his actions. Also at the moment he is behaving out of character we haven't really bottomed that one out.....Mmh where will you take us?
Date: 04/29/2012 10:54 PM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
What I find most interesting about this chapter is that Zelina considers herself unfixable, but that she still has enough compassion to stand up for Jim. I would like to think that she can learn to love again based on that, perhaps more than she realizes. (Not the sexual kind perhaps, but I have to believe the bonds of friendship and "family" (whatever that entails) go just as deep.) Thanks for the update.
Date: 04/29/2012 10:24 PM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
So sad what that child had to endure. Hopefully she can find some peace. Spock needs to suck it up and act like a man.
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2012 10:19 PM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
I'm glad zelania finally told Spock what she's been through. Maybe he will start to take care of her now.
Jim is a very good husband and father. I've really enjoyed his character.
Date: 04/29/2012 8:56 PM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
Jeeesus, so much angst I cried. took the day off work cause I've been working 12 hour days and getting very stressed, this was kinda cathartic.
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2012 7:05 AM Title: Explorations
This was great as usual - thank you so much for adding a new chapter!
I loved Jim and Zelania drinking milk shakes and I loved Spock offering her to teach her Vulcan music - finally he's approaching her!
But the end was a real cliff hanger! I am wondering how she will react to this terrible news. This is certainly something to break her.
Please update again soon!
Date: 04/29/2012 6:33 AM Title: Explorations
oh, no, that's terrible;
I realise Mpreg has been on your mind when hanging out at the Klingon Bar gets boring but I do like this story so, hurry back you've been missed
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2012 12:26 AM Title: Prologue
Milkshake-talking and gold-times-poker are favorite of mine.
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2012 10:18 PM Title: Explorations
I'm so glad to have another chapter of this. Very enjoyable.
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2012 9:43 PM Title: Explorations
I really like the sneaky way Jim got zelania to consume some calories. Now if he could get her and Spock to meet in the middle, that would be great.
I am glad for the update.