Date: 05/07/2012 12:44 AM Title: Facing Hard Truths
I like this story. It's exciting.
Also, I'm glad Spock's come up with some important conclusions finally and is trying to work with his daughter. I hope they have a little time to build something before you throw the next hurdle.
Date: 04/30/2012 12:18 PM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
This was sad and terrible and beautiful. Jim was all heart - I love him for it.
But oh please, when will Spock finally behave like a dad to Zelania? I wanted to kick him. And yes, I understand his insecurities somewhat but still - no excuse to behave like a d..k. (Sorry).
He'll get better--eventually.
Date: 04/30/2012 5:06 AM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
This is not stringing together which from past CMM suggests a plot twist on the horizon which will send us into a spin. We have not yet seen Spock deal with the secret he shared with zelania's mother or his guilt in failing realise the consequences of his actions. Also at the moment he is behaving out of character we haven't really bottomed that one out.....Mmh where will you take us?
Date: 04/29/2012 10:54 PM Title: The Dark Abyss of Pain
What I find most interesting about this chapter is that Zelina considers herself unfixable, but that she still has enough compassion to stand up for Jim. I would like to think that she can learn to love again based on that, perhaps more than she realizes. (Not the sexual kind perhaps, but I have to believe the bonds of friendship and "family" (whatever that entails) go just as deep.) Thanks for the update.
Date: 04/29/2012 7:05 AM Title: Explorations
This was great as usual - thank you so much for adding a new chapter!
I loved Jim and Zelania drinking milk shakes and I loved Spock offering her to teach her Vulcan music - finally he's approaching her!
But the end was a real cliff hanger! I am wondering how she will react to this terrible news. This is certainly something to break her.
Please update again soon!