Date: 03/30/2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please next time: division into chapters
Thank you very much for your feedback. This story was put up when a much earlier version of the software was used and dividing stories into chapters weren't possible (I imagine you must leave this feedback for a *lot* of the older stories on the archive, some much longer than this one!). When I get time I shall do as you ask and put the story into chapters for you. Meanwhile, I'm so sorry for the inconvenience.
Date: 06/19/2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
This may be the hottest, most satisfyingly in-character s/k fanfic I've read yet! Despite the occasional typo distracting me now and then, this story flowed at an excellent pace, setting the perfect tone for the mounting tension and sweet, sweet release. Loved it!!
Wow, thank you so much for your lovely feedback! I really appreciate it. ♥ I'm so happy my characterisations worked for you. I'm so sorry, though, that those typos caused such distractions and am very happy you were able to overlook them to enjoy the story. :-)
Date: 02/02/2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another lovely, compelling story. You've got a great way of working in events from the series and tweaking them. Loved it!
You leave the best comments! Thank you! It was fun working in episodes around the story - so glad it worked for you. :)
Date: 04/25/2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've never left a comment on a story before, but I couldn't help myself. That was awesome. It sexy, sure, but those are easy enough to find. It was also a great story, with very authentic characters, especially Spock. Much trickier to do. And the icing on the cake was the humour. That was the funniest story I've read on here. Thank you so much for sharing.
Wow, I feel honoured that my story is the first you commented on. I'm so glad that what you enjoyed went beyond the story to the characters themselves - I try hard to make them as authentic as I can and love writing from Spock's point of view - I'm really pleased to hear this worked for you. I love adding touches of humour and Bones is always a great one for the foil for it. :) Thank you so much for his wonderful feedback - I really appreciate it. :)
Date: 03/24/2011 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story - hot and loving at the same time. You have a gift for creating the right atmosphere. Love your stories!
Thank you for the comment - I'm glad you enjoyed this story and it toally is a love story where the two men involved just need their heads knocked together a bit, mataphorically speaking, to figure things out. :)
Date: 01/05/2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this and I was so glad to realise it was "Evil-Kirk" being such a dick in the lab.
Excellent interpritation of the episodes.
I had to switch the ep order around a bit to make that happened, but I couldn't pass up the parallel of Spock's constant human/vulcan war within himself and Kirk's adventure being split in two - and for them both to gain important insights from it. Thanks for such great feedback. :)
Date: 12/25/2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh!! What a fabulous story. I really loved the character analysis in this. Thank you so much for posting it!!
Thank you for the lovely feedback! I love getting inside Spock's head and seeing the world and the people in it as he does. :)
Date: 12/25/2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was so glad that they both realised that they loved each other. It was so beautifully woven together. The ending where Spock comes out of the blankets was priceless, you could just imagine McCoy's face. You remained so true to the characters which is what made it so believeable. Was still sitting up at 2am reading it on Boxing Day. Oh well sleep is over-rated.
I'm sorry I didn't respond to this lovely comment at the time you wrote it. I know what it's like to stay up way too late because I've become hooked on a fic and am thrilled that you found this story so compelling. I had a lot of fun writing that scene with Bones at the end and swear I grinned all through writing it, like you imagining McCoy's face when he catches them. :) I can totally imagine Spock being completely dignified in that situation even if Kirk is helplessly giggling at the whole scenario. :) Thank you so much for leaving such lovely feedback - I really appreciate it. :)
Date: 12/25/2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I'm so glad your Kirk and Spock didn't just jump together, that it took time for them to find out what they wanted. That made it all that much more priceless when it did happen. You write an awesome story and I want to thank this Kathleen Resch for letting you post this too! Thanks!
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it so much. It's great to hear the story worked for you - and that you appreciated how they needed to sort past a lot of stuff to figure out what was right for them. And yes, Kathleen Resch and her K/S zine T'hy'la rocks! :)