Date: 02/15/2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so much! It's both funny and sweet.
I also love how you gave the pets personalities without over doing the anthropomorphizing them, just has giving them thoughts but not having it in a form similar to dialogue.
After all, pets mostly use body language and scent than auditory communication, which is mostly done towards humans.
Keep up the good work!