Date: 06/18/2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely loved that. I adore Professor Spock slowly being seduced by self-assured but not so cocky when it comes to Spock Cadet Kirk!
Your fictions brought me into Fandom, so thank you for everything!
Author's Response: Your fictions brought me into Fandom You have no idea what that means to me - I'm really thrilled that my stories have worked so well for you. I honestly cannot begin to imagine what my life would be like without Trek fandom and I hope that over the course of your life you're as blessed as I've been with so many wonderful friendships. I had a lot of fun writing that story - my first attempt at a 'five-and-one' although I think I only managed four! I do believe Jim's cockiness is largely for show and underneath he harbours more doubts (as we saw in Into Darkness). I also believe he's someone who is very stubborn and will do everything he can to get something he really wants (The Enterprise, Spock). Thankfully! ;)
Date: 04/28/2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Woo hoo hoo, this was fun!! Nice re-do on the movie, love -- I really liked how they slowly grew to be friends and then more than friends. Nummy hot sex, and a feel-good ending, yeah baby, Wolfie likes it!! :)
Ah, glad you enjoyed it! thanks for the lovely feedback. :)
Date: 03/31/2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awww. This was beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. I love how Jim was basically taking liberties with Spock that another might not be allowed to. And how Jim fell from lust to love with Spock. I held my breath as Jim challenged the thugs with nothing but his allergy hypo. He didn't even know it was Spock, so it wasn't just love, it was Jim being a great guy. The melding at the end of their passion was great. Such beauty. And then the joy of Spock joining them for the mission. Yay! I love your writing, thanks so much for posting this.
What a fabulous and comprehensive review! :) I think Spock, in any universe, would let Jim get away with a lot more with him than anyone else. :) And equally, in any universe, Jim will always have a strong sense of right and wrong, justice and injustice, and do his damnedest to set things to rights, because yes, he is a great guy. And at the end, I think it was the meld, more than anything, that brought Spock back; the realisation he had found his true match in Jim, mentally (and, of course, physically). :) Thank you again, for this lovely comment - I'm really pleased you enjoyed the story so much! :)
Date: 03/31/2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it except for Bones commenting that all the thugs were convicted overnight. No due process anymore?
Thank you for your insightful comment - you're absolutely right, so I've made a small alteration as a result.