Reviews For Anticipation
Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 05/29/2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I lie in bed dreaming of you
My body twists, my legs pose too
I can almost feel your hands on me
My eyes close, I feel so free
Suddenly heat is on my skin
I laugh as you make the lights dim
And I can't wait for the fun to begin
Author's Response:
I just adore your rhymes...thanks for reading and adding more to it.
Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2011 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 05/23/2011 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's so mushy and adorable, as well as sensuous and passionate... Nice!