Date: 06/08/2011 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just a note about the description: you may want to edit it to say 'as the beating of their child's heart warms them' rather than 'the beating of their child warms their hearts', because... that implies child-beating. XD
Apart from that, nice poem and lovely photoshop. I always appreciate the time and effort it takes to make an image to accompany a piece, I only wish I had enough skill to do it myself!