[Report This]Date: 10/01/2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Captured
I'm intrigued by this, and looking forwards to the updates. I absolutely love slave fics.
Author's Response:
A person after my own heart :3 I will be working on it some time this week, I just need to figure out a few things first :D thank you for the comment!
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Captured
What a way to punish your slave! Spock being a superior Vulcan,is in charge now but I think that finally he will fall in love with Jim and their roles will be changed.Love your way of picturing the events in this story!!
Author's Response:
How could you have possibly known this? Have you been peeking inside my thoughts ?? >.> <.< There will be a twist either in the third or fourth chapter stay turned!
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Punishment
Whoa!!!!! That's a new punishment! Whew well lets see if it gets the message across. All in all Jim could be in worse circumstances. His back could have been flayed, or he could have been castrated.
Nicely done
Author's Response:
0.0 Oooo Ouch! So true! Thank you for the comment!
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Captured
Just added your first attempt to my favorites, you write well and the story is very promising! Looking forward to your update!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much it means alot!
Date: 09/26/2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Captured
Good premise; there were a couple of words that did'nt make sense to me, but aside from that really want to read more, and I have to say for a first go this is great.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I will be on the look out for words and things to make the story flow more smoothly and for everyone's understanding. :D
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Captured
Oh...I really am enjoying this...and you write very well...Your words are very descriptive and so easy to follow. Please update soon....
Author's Response:
I will try and get it wrote ASAP, thank you for the comment!
Date: 09/25/2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Captured
i am excited to see more of this! please update soon! :D
Author's Response:
I am working on it as we speak! Thank you so much your comment gave me a boost of confidence!