Date: 03/30/2013 8:34 PM Title: One
Spock always forgets the human element! His planning is perfect, his knowledge is correct, but he cannot quite factor in the Kirk element and it floors him every time. That was so beautifully written.
Oh, thank you so much. This was my second K/S fic ever. I'm so glad you liked it and that you *got* it. :)
Date: 03/04/2012 11:03 PM Title: One
Are you kidding me. Who could hate this? I don't usually read reboot, but I so enjoyed this. So very unique, candle wax?? That was a cool. Very hot story. Your writing is perfect, well done my friend.
The candle was inspired by a the Living Lavida Loca video from Ricky Martin. I honestly can't stand his music but the scene from the video just kind of stuck with me and now here it is manifesting itself in the form of Slash prop. LOL. Thank you for the kind words and for reading even though reboot ain't your thing.
Date: 02/26/2012 3:22 AM Title: One
Many greetings! It’s me again. I can see I’ll be following your stories like a puppy. Phrasing. Anyway. When I read the challenge my immediate thought went to 40 Days and 40 Nights as well. Because let’s face it …that sex scene I by far one of the sexiest in Hollywood history. Well that and the one in Mr. & Mrs. Smith.
Please excuse my babbling!
That was delicious by the way ….and very clever!
Hope to see more from you!
Yes, once I read Fugitive's original post--she had the challenge in her summary--I was wondering if that was what I was going to read and when I finished it and she had gone in a different direction entirely and the idea to use 40 Days and 40 Nights just wouldn't leave me alone!! So, I HAD to do it! LOL I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 02/25/2012 10:32 PM Title: One
Hot smoking damn! I am so glad I listed this challenge, if this is what came out of it. God damn, this is good! Thanks.
(PS I have been incommunicado for two days because my USB stick played up, and I had no internet. To come back to these answers to my challenge is just amazingly delightful, You have not idea.)
Wonderfully written, and it does indeed stay within the boundaries of the challenge lolol. Thank you!
Yay! I'm glad you liked it. I waited and waited for DAYS for more authors to answer the challenge and no one did, so I almost forgot about it because I haven't written anything in YEARS. And then I was browsing the challenges and I answered one and it was fun but I still wanted to write more and yours was on the second page and I was like--Oh yeah...and then all the naughty images came back to me and still no one had answered...I just couldn't let it go...lol. Now there's a TON! And they're all freaking HOT!
Glad you liked mine too and that I didn't cheat too terribly.
Date: 02/24/2012 9:01 AM Title: One
Hot candle wax? Tick.
Rose petals? Tick.
Naked & tied Vulcan? Tick.
Horny Kirk thinking outside the box? Tick.
Yep, that little gem of a fic has got everything I needed.
LOL! Thanks, I'm glad it met your requirements!
Date: 02/24/2012 8:35 AM Title: One
Hot, hot, hot. Of course, Jim is touching him--just not with his own flesh. But that's okay. Jim's good at cheating.
Precisely. The way I interpreted the challenge made this barely legal...LOL I'm glad you caught on to the whole theme of cheating. Spock's parameters were the use of toys and anatomy and the challenge itself didn't say I couldn't use a third party object (s) that, when not being wielded by Jim, are basically harmless and asexual...It just said they couldn't touch each other...and technically, they didn't. Not once.
Date: 02/24/2012 8:10 AM Title: One
I thought it was a great story. Very hot and very well written. Just wanted to point out that you used the word "illicit" twice, when you should have used the word "elicit". They're both pronounced the same (unless you're British), so maybe if you use voice recognition software, it substituted the wrong word.
GAH! No, but MS Word's auto correct is JUST as annoying, I promise you that! Thanks for the review and for pointing that out! Going to fix now.