Date: 04/16/2015 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Words cannot express how much I love this fic. It has everything. Controlled!Spock who flounders with strong emotions! A Jim Kirk who takes frightening risks for sound logical reasons! Sexual power play without compromising any of Kirk's self-assurance--it's so very hard to find something with D/s elements that doesn't just erase the sub's actual personality.
Also, I love that there is actual plot that gets resolved in a coherent fashion here. I'm so glad you didn't have them hop straight to boinking after the bar scene; that would have cheapened the whole thing, but your progression here is very natural. And also very hot. Well done. I'll be bookmarking this.
Date: 01/28/2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, thanks for sharing! Just a tiny detail: thee is the object, not the subject, grammatically speaking. So it's I love thee, but thou love me. Or I will silence thee, and thou belong to me. I think I've noticed you use thee for both the subject and the object. Anyway, again, just a detail! I really enjoyed reading this fic, so thank you for writing it :)
Date: 11/29/2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, just lovely. The way you got into Spock's head, and his *strength* was perfect. I especially appreciate how you respect Jim's smarts - too many fanficcers make him so much less than Spock. Less smart, less strong, just less. Sometimes, it seems that the only way that a Vulcan could keep a human is as a pet. Loved, you understand, but not actually respected.
This one goes in my favorites.
Date: 07/06/2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Refreshingly well-written, believable, and true to character. Excruciatingly titillating! I literally squealed aloud while reading this one. And I've been reading slash fiction since the early nineties, so that doesn't happen too often anymore. This one's a gem.