Date: 04/08/2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm reading all of your stories again, because I like them so much. I wanted to say that I especially appreciated these lines:
Emotion seems a terrible black hole to him, like those burned-out, transmogrified stars that eat whole sectors of space at a gulp. Spock fears that if he gives any quarter, he will be drawn in, flattened forever on the event horizon in an eternity of non-time, unable to free himself from emotion’s inexorable pull, lost and unable to save anyone. Least of all himself.
Date: 08/11/2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh great joy to see this story on the archive!! I had found it on the net some time ago during research for my Isis cosplaying. Had it printed and bookmarked immediately! So lovely. Admittedly, the concept of a powerful goddess bringing them together (with the added bonus of sex with Spock first) does carry the risk to fall into the Mary Sue trap -- BUT in my opinion you managed to avoid this most elegantly, in part due to the fine humour present throughout the whole story. Isis' observations and comments are so witty. And I love how Spock and Kirk point out each other's scars which they aquired by saving each other's lives.