Date: 10/21/2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful. I always like so soft, sweet and silent little storys of there coming together... :-)
THANK YOU. I'm glad you understood what I was aiming to achieve; something gentle, beautiful, and yet, still very erotic!
Date: 10/20/2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice, although it seemed awfully ... I don't know ... easy after all the dramatic tension it took in ST:TMP to get to this point. Love the chest hair! Would have liked to see more of what Kirk meant by this: '“As in, y’know, what we nearly got to before, if we hadn’t been so… confused by duty, and all those things?” Jim had to know.'
Well, I just had to go with it... You might have a point; I'm not too proud ro say it. Though, I think it was obvious that they'd dallied around admitting their love before, re. the duty line. Thanks though. Like I always say, hopefully, the next thing will be better. I really was just trying to answer the challenge, which, to me, spoke of being a PWP kind of story.