Date: 12/04/2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't usually read stories set in the Mirror universe, so I got a few paragraphs into this and double-checked to make sure it was listed as regular TOS. Yep, it claims to be TOS. I'm sorry, but Kirk is just NOT this big of a jerk. I bailed at the point where he called Spock a pervert.
Sometimes having the characters behave in an out-of-character way can be fun, but having our heroes behave like assholes isn't fun to me, so regretfully, I couldn't finish your story.
Date: 11/25/2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I wanted to enjoy this but it was too seme/uke for me, almost like a seminar on sexual harassment.
When Kirk is confusing Spock by conflating the roles of lover and captain (the authority he wields over Spock), it reminded me of this: http://www.erikcampano.com/why-episcopal-leaders-made-deal-new-york-post-misreport-sexual-misconduct/
Thanks for your input. I can definitely see where you're coming from and will try to be coignizant of that in my future dabbling.
Your link brought up a 404. However, I think I got the jist of what you were saying. Thanks again.
Date: 11/21/2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
You are a good writer, xo i hope you post more. Spock's zipper -- hmm. Roddenberry said that they didn't show zippers on the Enterprise uniforms because he thought people would have figured out all the ins and outs of fastenings by the 23rd century.
Ah. Thank you. I'll keep that in mind! :)