Reviews For Persuasion
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Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2013 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Delicious!

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2013 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

lmao! btw, sex scene was really hot, loved the teasing between the two of them.

Reviewer: AshayaTReldai Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sweet! I love it! You do have a talent, and I reckon your training shines through as it does in the work of other authors on here, like the incomparable CMM...

Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Kirk and Spock seem fairly out of character here, but it was fun, anyway.

“I had no idea I was fucking a thesaurus,” Kirk muttered, chuckling.  Gee, Kirk, have you MET Spock? :-)

"Fauna" means ANIMALS.  If Sulu wants a plant, that's "flora."  (The often-heard phrase "flora and fauna" means "plants and animals.")

 

 



Author's Response:

Oh man. I feel like an idiot for that mess up. Thanks!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cute and VERY hot story.

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