Date: 01/01/2014 6:09 PM Title: Complete Story
Hilarious! Great use of the 4 + 1 format, and I liked the sly nod in the direction of the less realistic fan fiction ("fics where two guys just go at it with a little spit and pre-come for the slide"). Also sputtered at the mention of those "cleansing products" that were all over the internet a few years ago,
Hee hee! Although spontaneity is more romantic, it does annoy me when characters/writers ignore the agony of unprepared buttsex!!
Date: 12/31/2013 10:13 PM Title: Complete Story
LOOOLLLLL. Jim trying to get his "ass-cherry" popped is just too cute and hilarious. It's hard to pick which was my favorite line, but the "standard issue Vulcan penis" has got to be one of them. AWESOME work!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!
Date: 12/31/2013 9:19 PM Title: Complete Story
Our poor guys! I'm glad they worked it out in the end. Thanks for a laugh!
You're very welcome -- thanks for reading!!