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Reviewer: deerstop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2015 2:24 PM Title: ----

Oh that a great story! 

Reviewer: skaylin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2013 4:54 PM Title: ----

I read this two times, slowly, drawing out my pleasure and taking in all the details. Love the minimalistic style and how you emphasize certain things by omitting them. No talk about emotions, except the most basic ones, but somehow says so much. Stark and austere, but so powerful. I would gladly read original fiction by you.

Reviewer: Jeanne Marie Sosa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2013 2:58 PM Title: ----

 It is of paralyzing importance that this not end.

 

This story was searing, etched now in my memory probably forever...it is of paralyzing importance that I re-read...again and again and yet again.

 

Brilliant!

Reviewer: Loethlin Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 1:04 PM Title: ----

Oh god dammit, I don't get it. I totally missed something and I don't know what ><

Reviewer: amberite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2009 11:27 AM Title: ----

You know, I just registered for an account so that I could review this.  Amazing.  Possibly the best pon farr story I've ever read, at least one of the best - pulls no punches. 

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 7:10 PM Title: ----

Hey, I really like the new & improved version. Nice, nice, nice. I enjoyed this story a great deal. More power to you.

Reviewer: Phoebe Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2008 11:26 AM Title: ----

Your style is so raw at times and you draw these characters with such stark lines. Yet, the reader is kept in a state of wondering what are we missing here? If we're not paying attention, we'll miss it. I'm fascinated by the mix of in-your-face writing and the deft touch present at the same time. Thanks for such a compelling story. I hope you continue writing many more stories.

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