Date: 10/17/2019 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved your story. Every one seems bang on. It seems perfectly in character to me that Jim would sacrifice himself and that Spock would accept that it was in his character to do so. I loved the wrinkle of the impact that it has on Spock - that he needs to bond not have sex. The interplay between Spock and McCoy was good as well, reminding us that they don't only trade quips. Also it was great to see the Venus drugs brought into an interesting story.
Thank you so much! I'm so happy the characterization worked for you, and thank you so much for commenting.
Date: 10/13/2019 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Auvh ich habe mit deiner Geschichte eine völlig neu Idee gefunden, die ich noch nie gelesen habe und dein Schreibstil macht großen Spass und hat mir ein Kribbeln im Bauch geschenkt. Vielen Dank! Ich hoffe weitere längere Geschichte von die lesen zu dürfen .
Date: 09/22/2019 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a wonderful story, well written and completely in character. Jim Kirk will do WHATEVER it takes to protect his ship and his crew, and I do believe that includes what you have him do here.
I've read a TON of Star Trek fan fiction and have never seen the Venus drug used in this way. Kudos for thinking up something NEW, even after 50 years of TOS fans busily writing!
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it--and delighted I was able to find a new angle on something even after all this time. :D