Date: 08/09/2013 3:23 AM Title: one
Good story. I loved your version of Spock, gentle yet with an aura of raw power, untroubled by the conflict between logic and emotion. Amazing take on the sex scenes as well.
Thanks. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Date: 09/15/2010 4:40 AM Title: one
Hi, great story once again! The OC were also quite compelling; and I empathized with McCoy's thoughts, and Jim & Spock's worry for each other.
I don't quite believe that Amanda as I imagine would have left Sarek forbid her to do anything without a fight; but that's just my own understanding of her and of their relationship in Journey to Babel, and that leaves room enough to imagination :-)
Thanks, again. I love the scenario of Spock saving Kirk and Kirk saving Spock and Spock saving Kirk again.
Did I have a deferential Amanda in here? I wrote the story a while ago and can't recall. I hope not as I never cared for her submissive behavior to Sarek in Babel. I realize it was designed to show his demanding personality, and to contrast her own human one, highlighting poor Spock's inner conflict more vividly - and, of course, this was the late 60's, when women didn't have the freedom they do now so it didn't sting nearly as much back then.
Date: 08/04/2009 6:40 AM Title: one
I honestly thought (several times) throughout this story that one of them wasn't going to make it. But they did! And I really do prefer happy endings.
Your writing style and ability to capture genuine emotion in a scene seem effortless. Thank you!