Date: 08/31/2010 8:15 PM Title: Checkmate
I love this story, it is so sexy and funny. I've read this story so many times and never get tired of it. I love the part where Spock calculates the yeoman age, its absolutely priceless and you can just imagine Kirk asking Spock (or should I say purring) if he is jealous.
You can tell you must love TOS please post more stories.
Date: 01/24/2010 11:07 AM Title: Checkmate
That was really good.
I only recently began to take an interest in TOS after seeing the 2009 movie (I'm part of the TNG generation). Amok Time is the first episode I've watched (for obvious reasons).
I love the descriptions of Spock's alien bits and how the two sides of his genetic inheritance interact painfully after lovemaking.
In nature, the hybrid offspring of two distinct species are often sickly and infertile so some small physical conflict between his two sides ads a nice touch of realism to an already wonderful story.
Thanks for a great read
Date: 01/05/2010 6:51 AM Title: Checkmate
I read this a while back and never commented so now i am...loved it...ah when Jim is all over Spock...yum and before on the bridge. The yeoman with Kirk and Spock telling her basically to get lost. Jim asking Spock if he is jealous...i see Jim saying that like it was on t.v....oh shit they would have been cancelled if the next part happened...oh just love these two...so hot...thank you for this..
Date: 07/06/2009 8:39 PM Title: Checkmate
I really loved your dialogue and the way you portrayed their interaction on the bridge. It seemed very in character to me. I also enjoyed the way you had Kirk just get straight to the point without a lot of pointless discussion. It was a good setup and pretty much expresses how I feel about many of the episodes (just kiss already!).
However, it would be dishonest of me not to point out a few problems in your sex scene. First, I was confused about how and when exactly they took their clothes off (if they did). Secondly, you basically depicted a straight up ATM (ass-to-mouth) scene, which is a highly risky behavior in real life, not to mention pretty gross to most people. Yes, there IS a fetish for this, but that's exactly what it is, a fetish. (Even rimming, aka 'salad-tossing' in prison, which can spread Hep C, is probably more mainstream than ATM.) I realize that this is fantasy, hence the lack of condoms or awkwardness, but I don't think I'm alone in being a bit squicked by the thought of Kirk sucking down santorum (no matter how much we may think the Shat-man deserves it).