Date: 02/04/2011 4:59 PM Title: Alpha Carinae II
Oh hey hey this is good! I want more please! So Jim and Spock have been captured on shore leave on this planet, I'm gathering. And at some point Spock is going to have to explain why he told the Captain he loves him. Yay! I see so many references back to TOS or a movie, and your facts are so clear. You really research this well before writing it! Your attention to detail makes it all that much better. Again, more please!
Date: 02/03/2011 8:17 PM Title: Bonding over Chess
You did an amazing job with this. The details were so crisp (at least when they were supposed to be!) and your descriptions were so clear that my active imagination had no trouble following along. I could just see Jim, stuck in his quarters, sick as a dog because of Spock. (SPOCK GOT TRASHED!! I will love you forever for that moment.) I was there as the alien entity took them through their tests. And their joy at being alive again. You left the end vague enough about Kirk and Spock that my mind can be overactive and imaginative all on its own. This is not the first story of yours I've read. You have a massive amount of talent and I thank you for letting us come on these journeys with you. Sadly, I can only give you 10/10 rating. Would I, it would be doubled.