Date: 02/27/2013 9:38 AM Title: Giving You Away for Someone Else to Take
I dont know the song but a follow up would be good!
Actually there is a sequel up. It is called Yellow Roses for her, Orange Roses for Jim.
Date: 04/04/2012 3:43 PM Title: Yellow Roses for Her, Orange Roses for Jim
Yeah, I have the opposite problem: My body temperature is higher than most.
I'm always getting too hot, but I don't feel the cold (I go bare-foot in the middle of winter).
Lower body temp (& slower metabolism) makes sense for a desert dwelling species... I Always assume it's the Andorians who "burn hot" on their Ice planet.
Good Story so far.
Date: 09/13/2011 5:47 PM Title: Wonderful
Now that I have regained my breath from all that vigorous applause... awesome work. As you may have gathered, I enjoyed this story immensely. I think this is the first fanfic I have read that draws the Winona character as a mom struggling with grief and the realistic pressures of trying to raise & fund 2 young kids on her own. Well done on creating a relationship between mother and son that labours under that immutable fact of life - even with the best of intentions and the most optimistic outlook, parents f**k up. And things can still work out wonderful, anyway!
Date: 08/31/2011 7:22 AM Title: Wonderful
I agree with zinelady, it's good to see a take on Winonna where she's simply a single mother who did the best that she could but made some bad choices.
Sam's death was heartbreaking though, I know how it is to lose a parent. I cannot fathom the idea of losing a child. That must have been enough to drive Winnona back to 4 sessions a week.
Obviously David has Jim and Carol's IQ, if he's able to at age 9 convince Starfleet to pull it head outta it's backside and let kids be with their parents in space.
Well written, and emotionally moving.
All in all Well Done
Date: 07/06/2011 3:58 AM Title: Giving You Away for Someone Else to Take
Ex Girlfriend is an awesome song but maybe I just love anything by a Stephani.
I really like this story. You get everything across in a few pages which takes restraint and skill. Major kudos. I like this take on their relationship and, moreover, it kind of fits my personal version in my head. TOTALLY AGREE about the Vulcan take on sexual identity. GET OUT OF MY HEAD, WOMAN. XD
Little bit scared to see the 2012 Trek movie because what you've written is 1050% cooler than anything they'll come up with.
Sequel? Plz? I like Replay (I know, I know) but it's about a girl. Oops. Nikki Minaj is good. Moment 4 Life. This night just remind me of/ Everything they deprived me of.