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Reviewer: 4dogshome Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

And I meant spackling, my computer obviously doesn't know how to spackle!

Author's Response:

lol!!  I mangle words all the time, is one reason I'm slow writing, have to debug the stuff after it's written!  anyway, it's all good!!

Reviewer: 4dogshome Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love your sparkling! And yeah, plot holes; ghods, a convoy could drive thru those. Now when I watch that episode, I'll have your story in mind to help fill in the holes!

Author's Response:

ah yes, TOS, home of a very healthy flock of plot holes.  whee!!  glad ye liked it!

Reviewer: Tatillon13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2015 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for sharing this story! It was a very pleasant read. Just a detail, at the end, the correct form is 'thou are mine', and not 'thee are mine'. I think T'Pau might actually make the mistake herself in Amok time, so maybe it isn't a mistake and formal Vulcan just translates as incorrect Shakespearian English... But I still thought I should point it out. At any rate, great story, thanks again for sharing! 

Author's Response:

way I figure it, Elizabethan is about the closest we can linguistically get without speaking Vulcan.  that's my story anyway!  it's true, though, they really did mangle the Elizabethan in that ep... still, Celia Lovsky kicked ass as T'Pau, nies?

Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

After reading the TOS novel, "The Pandora Principle," I have ALWAYS felt that Saavik was the child of Spock and the Rhannsiu commander.

You have confirmed it.

And given Spock and Jim their fated joining!


Author's Response:

Truth be told, I didn't plan on it being Saavik; I figured she came from Hellguard, something else entirely.  but I do see Spock as emotionally her father, given that he raised her when the rest of Vulcan would have been happy to never hear of her again.  is why I go EW at the idea of them ever ending up as mates.

Glad ye liked it!!  This was me first ever zine-published story.

Reviewer: argona Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2012 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. Very well-written and in character.I always thought the Enterprise incident could have gone wrong in so many ways and your fiction can easily be what really happened.

Author's Response:

Aye -- the first time I saw that ep I sat and stared like I'd been hit on the head with a baseball bat, lol!  Glad it works for you!!

Reviewer: ivycross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is remarkable. Really it is. This was so excellent that I sat at my computer after reading it trying to think of ways to tell you how great it was. The paragraph at the end describing the bonding was like poetry.  This is one I will read again.

Author's Response:

(puts his paws in his sleeves and bows)  I am honoured indeed; thankee, sai!  XD

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I could not leave it. I devoted every Friday to read and after midnight.
I knew there would be no rest for me and I could not sleep until I know the situation of Spock be better.

this Phrase was lovely, I loved him;
He had never laid with a man before, and yet he felt as if he was finally coming home to where he had always belonged

I wondered what Jim prayed to the stars, I think it was something like:

"For all Is know and what still is unknown,
I am grateful for got spock back to me alive
I will do everything in my power, and even my own life to protect him from harm
I am grateful for this Priceless opportunity how given me. amen "

Author's Response:

somethin' like that, aye...  damn, dunno how I missed seeing this before, but delighted ye enjoyed!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow....this was amazing...yep it's me going through your work again and loving it..some wonderful stories I commented last year and forgot i had...not everyone can write stories you want to read over and over are one of the gifted ones.

Oh and I just found out a few days it true that you are a man. Please forgive me but someone just told me this and I fell on my butt.  Now, I have to read your stories thinking he know what he is talking about..he is a wonderful to have a man writing blows my mind.

So happy that you do it because we love you for it....

Author's Response:

Awwww! (blushes all green under his fur)  Wow, man -- believe me, I loves ya right back for it BB!  And yeah, I haz tha honour to represent us guys here, heh heh...  I wonder if more "boys' love" manga authors are dudes or ladies?  Not to mention yaoi authors/artists.  Hmmm...  Wonder if I could get me a grant to do research about that.  Hmm!  I know they say it's mostly women writing slash -- all's I can say about dat is, I'm glad there's so many of them!!  Whatever the plumbing, there's a lot of good slash authors out there I love to read.

Glad ye liked this one, too -- this was me first written-for-a-zine story, and it ate my life for a while there!

Reviewer: dristi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2009 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

hi,! your stories are wonderful and always a delight to read. hope to read many more stories from you...

Author's Response:

Thankee sai!  Working on posting more of them; computers getting all re-arranged this weekend and then, onward we go!

Reviewer: Jules Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2009 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this story when I first read it and have just fallen in love with it all over again. It just seems to fill so many holes that were left in the original story. Jules

Author's Response:

Yeah, there were a lot of them, huh!  Heh, heh...  This is also the first story I wrote specifically for zine publication.  Glad ye like it!!

Greywolf, pleased

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