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Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can just see that scene now but with silence and slight slow motion with the odd whale song squeek. Sort of holds their feelings and future in balance.

then suddenly the embarrassed kitk image and the world gets back to normal. I can just see Nimoy planning that to get back at JTK for all the exasperating female encounters Spock had to witness. 

Then profound saddness recalling how they nearly lost Chekov in the same movie anf Anton's untimely death. 

Reviewer: mdevile Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2009 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1



This was beautiful. So very poignant. Jim's pain is a subtle thing, buried beneath his strength but you brought it out with a delicate touch, avoiding the slide into melodrama. I ached for him.

Your explanation for Spock's reticence on the katra rang completely true, I could not imagine ne better able to assuage Jim's fear.

Bravo. I say again, this was beautiful. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, mdevile. I was hoping I hadn't overlooked some other obvious explanation for the katra issue. It's good to hear from you!

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