Date: 11/17/2019 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
OH MY HEAVENS
I realize I'm ten years late to the game here, but GOOD LORD this is pure golden perfection that has caused me to shed Real Actual Tears and make my heart and soul feel so full and happy and grateful for such beauty to have made its way onto my screen and into my eyeballs!!!!!!!! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this absolutely gorgeous, exquisite, gentle, passionate, soft, BLISSFUL scene--I haven't been so moved by a story in months, if not years. <3 <3 <3
(Okay, excuse me while I go sob uncontrollably over how extraordinary and transcendant this is.......)
Date: 03/30/2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, man. I... My heart... I knew what was going to happen, and you made me still feel that anxiety you always feel in movies that they won't get there in time/ that they won't realize their feelings in time. Bravo, you. I don't know what magic that represents, but it is most certainly magic.
Date: 07/24/2013 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poignant and beautiful! If only this had been their path rather than the pain of Gol and the bleakness of Ciani and a loveless marriage! I definitely prefer your ending!
Date: 05/24/2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
תרגום מעברית לאנגלית
(bitterly crying) "It's all so beautiful" (blows her nose furiously) "I need more tissue"
It's the most romantic story I ever read. Emotional and intelligent. He also showed me pattern concepts and feelings that I never could to describe in simple.
You blew me away. Thank you
Date: 07/31/2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I swear to God, Spirk fanfiction has some of the best writers. I've been reading other fanfics of other non-Star Trek pairings, and they make me want to vomit. I always have to detox myself on the k/s archive. Srsly.
And now that I've gotten that off my chest, let me say that this was a very pleasant detox. xD Seriously, this story could have gone wrong in so many ways, but you kept it flowing and honest throughout, and the characters were SPOT on. I love-love-love-loved Kirk's explanation of his first time exploring the galaxy. Fantastic touch.
I have much <3's for the story. Thank you! :)
-Spirk-Sporked >: )
Date: 05/08/2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is the most moving story I've ever read! I've read it twice already and I'm sure I'll read it many times over. It leaves me speechless and so very happy. I extend my deepest appreciation to the author, Cruz, for the fine work done here.
Date: 05/07/2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Although I love reading all kinds of K/S stories and appreciate the different perspectives that the authors bring to the fandom, THIS is the story that has resonated with me the deepest. You have so completely and poignantly captured what I have always felt to be the essence of Kirk and Spock's love for each other, and you have done it with a beauty and mastery of words that has left me breathless. Your love for and understanding of the characters rings true with every word. Thank you.
Date: 01/19/2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Definitely one of the most beautiful, heartwarming pieces of fiction I've ever read! These two were meant to be together. And you did an amazing job of capturing their special bond with your incredible talent. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece!!!
Date: 10/15/2009 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness. This story is beyond amazing! So heart-wrenching! Full of sugar and fluff-I think I just developed diabetes from reading it. o.O
But seriously, though; amazing story. You should be proud of yourself for coming up with something so brilliant and moving.
I could honsetly feel the chemistry and magic between them as I read.
If only the TOS series could have ended like this...*sigh*
Date: 10/10/2009 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
What can be said...you created such a beautiful love story. What fitting end to it's five year mission making us guess to the end. When Jim spoke in Vulcan to ask Spock to marry him it was like Jim became a little Vulcan to complete Spock. Your descriptions of how Spock felt for Jim, the sadness Spock was feeling knowing that they were gonna part there separate ways and then boom Jim hits him with a question that could melt a Vulcan heart.....love it...thanks so much....this is what love is all about....