Date: 11/02/2009 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww. Very nice first time story!! It was hilarious to see everything go hopelessly wrong before it finally went blissfully right. How in hell Kirk though a Vulcan, from a DESERT planet, would be a natural in any water sport I cannot fathom, but the picture of Spock as an indignant seal was a priceless one :-D Loved the little joke Spock cracked at Scotty at the end.
I'm explaining it to myself as Kirk being so loved up that he really couldn't see beyond Spock having good balance...but that could just be my excuse for wanting him being all indignant sealy!! Thanks for reviewing :-)