Date: 04/18/2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I usually find a 100% originally female Kirk just a tad bit hard to wrap my mind around. But after reading parts 1, 2, 3, and 4 I though. This ain't so bad. It's actually quite decent. And was going to conclude that the entier story was quite nice on the mind, like something very simple and thoughtful. Well... I thought.
But the last chunk of dialog smacked me like a bulldozer.
What a MOUTH that woman has on her! O_O Gods. I did NOT see that coming.
Besides the 'rude awakening' of a part 5. This piece was good.