Date: 03/26/2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am a little confused. Is this part of a series? I didn't see that it was when I started reading, but it has the feel of a partial story.
I was surprised nonetheless because I initially expected it to be a Spock and Jim reunite at Jim's second death story, but it isn't. Kudos on that. I'm pretty good at anticipating story lines and didn't see this one coming. Guess I'll go investigate the rest of your work and figure this out.
Date: 11/18/2009 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was amazing i didn't expect that at all. Oooh i can see Jim Kirk with those silvery eyes and then they go back to blue. Oh and when they kiss....really good. Great job...suspenseful
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 11/18/2009 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Heh heh, this story is sneaky good. (I wuv Spock Prime ... who should be Spock null or Spock, not Spock prime (S'), the reboot universe is universe prime, damn idiot non-sciency script-writers.
Kind of want a sequel because Immature!Kirk with super powers sounds like it has serious scenery-chewing potential.
Heh, thanks! In regards to a sequel, I haven't made up my mind yet *G* RL is pretty busy coming up and my track record with sequels and WIPS is woeful right now.
Date: 11/18/2009 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ouch!! Damn, what a NASTY setup! Poor Spock, poor Jim, worst of all, poor nuSpock, his Jim don't want him, ouchie ouchie ouch.
Yur a meanie!!
Greywolf, wondering if there will be any more of this or not...
Yeah, I was pretty mean to them both in this one *eg* Thanks for reading! As to a sequel, (and RL permitting), I haven't decided what to do yet. Part of me thinks it stands better as a one-shot.