Date: 10/27/2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant - I even became interested in wanting to know a bit of info about what happened to the planet. Did she kill those people in self defence, or did they kill themselves due to be overwhelmed by what was happening that they couldn't fathom?
Date: 01/04/2011 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story....you have such a descriptive imagination. I love your explanation about Surak. How he found the peace in him and spread it to others. Plus I love the interraction between Jim and Spock...just so perfect and comforting...
Date: 12/26/2009 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well done! Interesting concepts and the visual descriptions were oddly vivid. I kept getting these flashes of perfect images.
Thank you so much for reading this, and for your particular feedback. I'm so glad that the visual descriptions worked for you as they did. Since I can't draw so much as a convincing stick figure, it's lovely to know that the words in my story can substitute for a physical image. :)