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Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2015 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is so painful and just so well constructed if I've said so before it warrants repeating

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful and heartachingly sad. You certainly managed to surprise me with the totally unexpected end. Luckily I do not usually read the reviews before reading the story.

Reviewer: argona Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

The last sentence is...heart breaking.

Reviewer: HaveYouHeard Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh!! I feel so sad now for Kirk, even though that was smokey hot!! Loved it!

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent wordsmithing

Reviewer: WendyPlains Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, the last couple of lines where like  a punch in the gut - you left me breathless.  That was totally unexpeced.  Really well written. 

Reviewer: dristi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2009 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1


wonderfully written and so sad, specially the last line....


Reviewer: PolarStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2009 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

How do you do it? Such a short fic, and yet it almost brought me to tears.

Great job, makes me want to read lots more from you!

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2009 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wahh...  Damn.  I do love a good deathfic, but ouch!

Ah, well.  Do ye know how he died, or did that part come to ye yet?  I'z just curious, y'ain't obliged to answer.  Stands well as is.

Author's Response: On a mission. Struck down unexpectedly in his prime, etc etc.

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2009 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, so!  So sharp, so painful -- such a contrast to the warm sensuous beginning.  (wipes eyes)

But what happened?  Story says end, listing says not complete -- how did this come about?

Wolfie -- still appreciating the sharpness of thy blade...

Author's Response: whoops. It is complete.

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