Date: 10/23/2014 4:28 PM Title: Winter Sun
Lovely Christmas Story. I like it that your Spock is really quite alien in many ways, but that Jim is quickly learning to read him. I appreciate a lot that the cabin is shown as being so obviously artificial, it makes the story more realistic, I'm pretty sure a holiday planet would not be able to reproduce a genuine mountain cabin in detail.
Date: 07/26/2010 5:20 AM Title: Winter Sun
I liked it, it was quite sweet. My only quirk about it is I don't belive Spock would have accepted a mug of coco, considering coco = chocolate. And Vulcans are depicted as immune to the effects of alcohol, but become inebriated by ingesting chocolate - which I just don't think Spock would find appropriate with Jim before they were close. *shrugs* just my opinion.
Author's Response: Well, the chocolate thing is open to interpretation, since novels aren't strictly canon. For the purpose of this fic, my interpretation is that a mug of cocoa isn't going to get him roaring drunk, it just relaxes him a bit. It's the equivalent of a glass of wine on holiday - I think Spock would have enough confidence in his own self-control not to be unduly concerned about that.