Date: 08/25/2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are made of win. That was amazing and I could see them like it was the most natural thing in the world...damn that should have been the ending....on tv......oh please bless us with more of your stories..i think i am gonna go and read it again............loved it....
Date: 04/19/2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I watched "The Tholian Web" for the first time a couple months ago (I'm fairly new to the fandom) and I was quite disappointed that Jim did not have a private tape for Spock in that episode. I am so glad I came across this story, because now my wish came true! This is extremely well written; it fits perfectly into the episode and you handle the characters in a very believable way...you should be proud of yourself for a wonderful first Trek fanfic :)
Date: 04/01/2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this....really nice. Spock felt so sad when he thought Jim was lost. A second tape is just what Jim would have done...still would have been funny if they had made a mistake a played the other first....McCoy would have died there. You did a great job. Spock knowing that Jim loved him has made his quite happy. Too scared to anything yet but perhaps later. You are going to have to write another...
Date: 03/31/2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Short and sweet and to the point. I enjoyed your story...in fact I'd like more, I mean that's going to be an interesting game of Chess. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I will take a shot at expanding on it. I'm not very good at capturing Spock's "voice" yet, but I'll put some effort into it.