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Reviewer: sherryillk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 10

This story makes me ache for Spock. I have no idea how he got where he is now but it's incredibly sad...

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Mwaaaahahahaha! That thing with Joanna? Hi-larious! I feel bad for Spock because I think he wanted to keep playing his lyre. Oh well, at least one McCoy was appreciating it. This chapter was awesome. Kirk is handling things fairly well. Spock not dangerous, though? I'm not sure Kirk knows from Vulcans and dangerous. Guess he's going to find out, right?

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yay! Number One gets her own command! Okay, so that isn't a review, I just had to comment. Rah rah!

Author's Response: I was actually really baffled by her nonappearance in the new movie. Why was Spock Pike's first officer? I would have thought maybe she got her own command, except that up until the end of TOS, there were no female captains allowed... Well, screw it - in this timeline, the Federation's situation is precarious enough to do away with archaic gender-based rules a little earlier than they did in the last. ;)

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm liking this shtick where Kirk is winning Spock over on a personal level without even meaning to. I mean, there's the things he's consciously trying to do (like bullying Spock into accepting his help) and then there's the way he's surprising Spock just by being close to him. So kewl.

Reviewer: Ivy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, great speech!  Wow!  That was like a real speech; only better (even before the coda)! Most commencement speeches I've ever listened to put me to sleep.  ---But then again,  I wasn't graduating from Starfleet Academy, either! 

I'm really enjoying this one!

Reviewer: vitaminH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

love the story Thanks for the quick updates.

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

Spock calling Kirk "Kirk" is making me chortle with glee. I am addicted to this story...

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

"So the whole point," he was explaining to Spock, gesturing with the hand that wasn't holding the bottle, "is just to make the balls go in the hole.

Hehheh hehheh heh. You said "balls".

Wow, mind is more in the gutter than Kirk.

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow, your "plot bunny" took on a life of its own! This story really grabbed my imagination: I've been fantasizing about their courtship and bonding (on the Enterprise, of course) all day. I don't know how you managed to get them so in character and yet made them so intriguing/lovable/fascinating. Seriously, Spock is fascinating. I nedes 2 noh moar.
I think your Kirk has totally fallen in love with Spock already. Spock is a little more circumspect, but Kirk has already gotten him to see him in a new light. And what did Spock Prime say to piss him off? Well, I think I can guess...

Reviewer: filliamhmuffin Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really REALLY love this so far! It stayed on my mind all day after I left it this morning, came home and devoured the rest of the last chapter right away. Thanks for writing such an awesome AU. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Sahviere Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Was reading this over at LJ, fantastic to see you posting it here as well.  Your story has all the characteristics of a great story (for me) - I like to read your chapters slowly, make each one last as long as I possibly can. I linger over the lines of dialog that are so *right* for the various characters, enjoy the smooth transitions from one scene to the next, revel in the inner dialog of this Kirk, who is still Kirk but mature and 'realised' in such a believeable way.

Thanks so much for writing and posting this.

A tiny note on ksarchive posting : site admin has requested that works in progress not be tagged as 'fiction', so you might want to use a 'WIP' tag until you're done.



Author's Response:

Ah, thanks for the tip - I'm still a little confused by the way things work over here.

 

And thank you for the kind words as well. =)

Reviewer: vixis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

that drop will haunt ME until you finish the story! My mind is in pain here!!

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