Date: 07/20/2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just love H/C and this story is superb. Great antidote for way too much fluff coming down the pipe these days. I find your characterization of both Kirk and Spock to be excellent and the prose flows effortlessly. Only one complaint...too long in between installments. Please update soon.
Thanks very much XD The good news is I have about half of the next chapter written, the bad news is I have a week old baby, so I've been a little occupied with other things ;-) I need to get my brain and hormones back in gear before I can tackle Spock-angst :-)
Date: 06/23/2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just finished chapter 5...and I love your writing skills. So much detailed description on how Spock is feeling. The horrible things those men did to Spock will have an effect on Jim. The end is so dear because it shows for an instant that Spock before succumbing to sleep felt genuine confort from the simple touching of their hands. When he does heal physically it will be a long road for him to heal mentally. Hopefully it won`t cause to much a rift between the captain and him...Spock needs time but how much time is Kirk willing to give...can`t wait til next chapter....excellent work...
Thanks XD The next chapter might be a while since I have a new-born baby - but it's half written, at least!
Date: 06/22/2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
You continue to hit just the right notes with this new chapter. The story is completely absorbing andwonderfully well written. Looking forward to more.
Thanks XD I've just had a baby, so it might be a while until the next chapter's finished - but it is half written at least!
Date: 06/01/2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
Again another chapter with so much emotion. What they did to Spock was so horrible, the beatings, the abuse emotionally and physically...the humiliation. Spock can't stop thinking about what happened. As a Vulcan Spock when he meditates he usually reviews the days events. Catalogues the points of interest and discards the rest. He just cannot seem to do this now. Jim who wants so much to confort him ...in the human way is unintentionally pulling them apart. Time will only tell. Thanks again for this awaiting chapter 5.
Thank you :-) Hmm... now I'm thinking about Spock trying to meditate - you may have just given me a lead into chapter 5 - thanks! :-)
Date: 05/31/2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
So sad, but so well written. I'm glad you updated. I'll be waiting for the next part and checking back regularly. <3
Thanks :-) And sorry I've not been getting back to reviews - I've been without the net for a while!
Date: 05/16/2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic story! Your characterisations are so real. You make the reader feel Spock's pain. Can't wait for your update. This is one of the best WIP's going at the moment......Please don't make us wait too long!
Thank you :-) Just uploaded the next chapter now - although that's all I've got, so there might be a bit of a wait for no. 5!
Date: 05/14/2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
You write so well...you bring me along Spock's horrid journey of pain and anger. Jim wants so much to confort him but will his touch be to painful...will it remind him of the men that raped him. This may hurt their relationship...can't wait for the next chapter...you are doing an excellent job...never stop creating your magic...
Thanks :-) I'll do my best :-)
Date: 05/06/2010 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is so well written, the torture Spock went through, described in such detail and Jim who sees him at his worse. The shame that Spock feels for what has happened to him. The love is never waivering from his dear friend Jim. Looking forward to the next chapter...
Thank you very much!
Date: 05/06/2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Incredibly well written. Truly a fantastic read. I just know I'll go crazy before you post the next installment. The characterization is right on so far....
Thank you :-) (and sorry I've been so long to respond - I've had no proper net access for a while...)
Date: 05/05/2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Om nom nom, updates... (Homer Simpson)Mmm! Updaaatesss! [Slavering zombie noises](/Homer Simpson)
Heh heh, you are evol like an evol thing, you! This?
Greywolf, eager for moooore...
Thanks :-) I am horribly evil, it's true... Just updated now :-)
Date: 05/04/2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap!! You gots to post update plsnaothx!!!
Damn. You got all my favourite stuff in here, and that picture is very evocative -- but what a place to cut off!
Greywolf, wants more pls
Thanks :-) Just updated - and I'm writing the rest slowly!