Date: 06/03/2010 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
The smiley faces on the underware is a nice touch..but I actually could see McCoy giving those to Spock as a gag gift and a pair of "hot lips" underware to Jim instead. Very well done and original.
Author's Response: ...You know, I wish I'd thought of that. XD Thanks!
Date: 06/02/2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely hilarious! Everyone remains wonderfully in character. I love how Jim barely notices that he's sporting a sheet once he gets to the bridge, and Spock's "duty before decorum" attitude is adorable. I can picture this playing out as an actual episode of the show. Thank you for writing this fic!