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Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is an old one, isn't it? But still a good one... I find these ones where they never tell each other how they feel SO SAD! (Btw, misplaced apostrophe on Bones)

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

He does not even have a kiss
A memory of touch to cherish
Why must their story be so sad
Full of danger, the unfortunate, the bad
Undeserved hardship
At least that's what I think

Reviewer: missfae Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great work and that empty chair gives me chills.

Reviewer: Mirrorgirl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

A sweet and tender poem, beautiful

Reviewer: ksiscanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

ahhhhh this is so sweet! :D mon amie, tu es une poetess magnifique <3 seriously, this made my morning. Especially the last few lines, Jim seems so vulnerable I just want to hug him lol anyways awesome poem I hope you post more. And once I find my french one in my massive pile of notebooks, I will post it here!

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