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Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2012 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it. I wasn't able to review it until now because I was dragged out to go camping...  X.X

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

A kiss is just a kiss
And a hug is not an embrace
Until you find someone willing to hold you tight
And someone wanting to stay with you for every night
A soulmate, a brother, a firework explosion
A friend

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is really brilliant. Your poetry is just stunning now. And the additional screen shot at the end is pure unexpected heaven.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much my friend, for thinking so. I thought it would be nice to show them young kissing like humans and older kissing Vulcan style.  The last image has a different feel to it, because I flipped the image and played around with the color and lighting. Merci bien...

Reviewer: Bastet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Who ever said a kiss is just a kiss.

 Never met a Vulcan and a Human quite like this.    (Ain't that the truth...very nice.)

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