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Reviewer: KIEL Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

This is so good. Registered just I could review this. I know this has been updated last time in 2009, but had to gongratulate you on taking that prompt and making it into such interesting story.

Reviewer: Debauchi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow... I am so looking forward for next chapter!!! good job! :D i love this fic-

Reviewer: HaveYouHeard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

Seriously can't wait for next update. This story has such a unique angle, I just can't keep away =p Can't wait for Spock to start educating Jim on love-making XD!!

Reviewer: victorviolet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great story. Are you planning on finishing it? I know it's been a while, but...


I hope to see more one day!

Reviewer: Dhemlar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2011 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is amazing! I love the twist in the timeline and I cannot bear to think that the last chapter isn't up yet.

It is so precise and delicious. :3

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

I loved this story...You always leave us wanting more....Now I must wait for the next chapter.......patience....patience......

Reviewer: Ltx Yoru Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 15

That's all I can say right now...This Nero is pure evil isn't he? I can' wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Ltx Yoru Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

All I can say to this is: IN YOUR FACE, KIRK!! lol I loved Jim and Spock's little conversations but apparently they must cease. Onto the next chapter!! ^^v

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh it did indeed...Well done. I cannot wait to see the bridge scene...thanks for the update.

Reviewer: BioPyroManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

For the love of God update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I fuckin love this chapter it made my day and cmon it's my crack!!!!!!!! I wanna see a love scene with Kirk and Spock plAying chess and then kissin or maybe the first time Spock calls Kirk T'hy'la and smex or something but omg woman update!!!!! You will make my year!!!!! Yay 2011 closer to 2012 and the new Star Trek!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Damnnnnnnnnnnnnn...You had to end it there...oh you are so wicked......I LOVE YOU STORY...YOU WRITE SO WELL ...and I can see this version so my mind it's freaky....the dialogue between Jim and Ambassador Spock.  I wonder what he will say when he sees behind the door..The hmmmmm intimate door...come are gonna make us wait aren't you...Please not too long..ahhhhhh Jim is gonna find this weird seeing himself and ..... doing .... oh well can't wait..YOU ARE SO MADE OF WIN.............

Reviewer: smithgirl313 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this sorry so much!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2010 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

What a roller coaster ride Kerchan............fricken brilliant ...I don't know what else to say it was just perfect....I love the scene with McCoy and Spock crying and holding each other...ok so Spock doesn't show any tears but he he was the subsititute for Uhura which is wonderful I think..Can't wait for the next never cease to amaze me...thanks for sharing... 

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 10

Excellent chapter ....words cannot describe the ride you gave me with this chapter.  Damn you are good....I honestly don't know what Bones will do for his friend.  Will Jim just accept the truth.....he knows what Bones is saying is true.  But he is confused.  His anger for his supposed father is beyond reason, but now what of Ayel his supposed uncle...he lied to him also.  Poor Jim...looking forward to the next chapter ...thanks for sharing your wonderfu story Kerchan...

Reviewer: chironstar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 10


I like your take of the drill fight - I'm sad to see Hanaj sacrifice himself, though I'm very glad that Jim and Sulu saved each other.  The bit with Amanda always makes me sad, and go Sulu and Bones for being so observant!  Bones is such a wonderful friend ... This story just gets better and better with each chapter and I can't wait to read the next part to see the fallout from the revelations!  And OMG what's gonna happen with Ayel?  I still want Jim and Ayel to reunite!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2010 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Dear KERCHAN ....i already reviewed just checked out all the stuff you do...the art and the vids...i think i saw forever young 3 times...just wondering if you belong to a slash group..there is kirk/spock facebook but i have one too. It is called The Slash Connection...and would love it if you would come and visit...Illogicallylogical, Mirrorgirl, and Bastet have joined...would be great to see your art on our group...Medicated Maniac is a dear friend of mine from New Zealand...let me know are so made of win...and go ahead ...BLUSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....TAKE CARE....

Author's Response:

*blush* I'm so predictable! XD lol! I will consider it. I'm not apart of any Kirk/Spock groups at the moment (just the Spirk group on Deviantart). I will take a look and consider joining. I am very happy that you enjoy my work. Thank you so much for the kind comments. They really spur me on to do my best!

Reviewer: chironstar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

Let me put it this way: I find myself enjoying this AU as much as (if not more!) than the actual movie! I love all the conspiracies and schemes that are happening, and you write the characters so very well. I love the deep friendship between Jim and Bones, and Jim's conflict is so understandable. I love how protective Spock is of Jim, and the scene of Bones in the sickbay was so sad. I really hope Ayel and Jim can reunite ... and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the comment! *blush* I am so happy that you are enjoying it. I tried to keep the same dynamic you see in the movie and representing the characters can be a little tough. Your encouragement means a lot to me! I do hope the rest of the story keeps you on the edge of your seat as the updates come. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

Excellent job Kerchan.  I love your much fun...can't wait to see what will happen next.  Thank you for sharing your wonderful story.

Author's Response:

*blush* Oh dear! thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

You are doing a wonderful job many things happening...and now things are changing between Spock and Kobayashi Alternative.  Two years is a long time...could time have made them far less hostile towards each other making them want to be closer as equals...Pike scared the shit out of me..he is scary and an ass when he wants to be...anyways sounds wonderful can't wait to see if Spock will turn Jim over...or even Bones for that matter...will he follow Jim when he says now is the time.....come with me...update rock

Author's Response:

I am so happy that you are enjoying the story! I do love Jim and Bones friendship dynamic and I wanted him to play a bigger role in this story than what was given him in the movie. I was thinking from a stand alone point of view that Jim and Bones could end up very close since Jim and Spock haven't found their dynamic yet. Thank you so much for your comment!

Reviewer: chironstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

What a wonderful chapter!  Bones is such a great friend, and Jim is such a rebel!  Your Spock and Pike are awesome, and I love the programming duel between Jim and Spock!  Can't wait to see what happens next!  :D

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It was a lot of fun to write their programming duel! XD

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