Date: 05/24/2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
You cant just leave it there!!!! Please write some more?
Date: 04/09/2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just started reading this story the other day and I think it's amazing. Jim's trust issues make me sad because they hurt Spock (I LOVE Spock :D) but they're completely understandable. I hope you can update soon! :)
Date: 12/09/2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
ack! cut off too soon! :)
I'm not sure if this is really a criticism or just a thought (or just that chapters are coming out slowly) but I'm starting to get lost in the circles within circles of just what or why Spock was doing to destroy the bond. It's getting so convoluted that I'm having a harder time buying it (or following it). So the bond is painful because of Kirk's fears? Or ... I'm lost.
It must be my real life, or the conversation that the explanation comes out in, because the explanation isn't convoluted. The bond is painful because it is wounded. It is wounded because Spock's unconscious is yanking on it to get rid of it. Spock's unconscious is doing that because it wants to please Jim. Why would that please Jim? because Jim is scared of relationships.
Ok, it's complex. It's a little weird because Vulcans should be more aware of their unconscious (they meditate). But I'm going with the idea that it all happened so fast that things that shouldn't have gone wrong did. Is that better?
Date: 11/28/2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh. My. God. And I thought the last cliffhanger was anxiety inducing. What in the frilly heck is Spock doing?! You are evil. A week is sooooo long! I'm assuming my whining isn't going to actually make you write faster, but still. *pouts*
Sorry, speed is dependent on real life, I'm afraid. And you'll find out. It's twisted logic. Thank you.
Date: 11/17/2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
You and your angst-filled cliffhangers! This was really good. I'm going to be anxious until the next update because 'what is happening to their bond'?! *bites fingernails*
You do realize I'm amused by all of you yelling about them, right? ;) Fingernails are ok, but please, no bloody fingers, ok? Thanks :)
Date: 11/15/2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
That's quite a cliffy. Did someone attack Spock? I hope Jim tries to help him.
I really like the way they are getting in tune with each other through their bond.
More questions that'll be answered later! ;) Thank you.