Date: 02/15/2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice.I must admit when I read the summary I assumed Jim and Bones are going to seduce Spock together but that didn't happen which dissappointed me and bones and Spock only glared at each other so it wasn't a threesome but other than these details, it was a very sexy and fun story to read.
I'm very particular about my threesome pairings, and have never been a fan of McCoy/Spock. Since so few McSpirk fics have unbalanced dynamics or come out and say it, I tried to be upfront about it in my own fic. The summary might be too vague in that sense, but the story note, at the very beginning, states "Threesome, McCoy/Spock/Kirk. To be more accurate, it's McCoy/Kirk and Spock/Kirk at the same time." In other words, not McCoy/Spock. I'm not sure how else to convey that McCoy and Spock's relationship is simply a share interest in Kirk. Technically, it is a threesome, at least by my definition. I'm sorry if you overlooked the note. I could put in the summary, but I didn't think it necessary, since, well, it's supposed to be the first thing anybody reads when they click on my story. =_=
I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless.
Date: 02/25/2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was too delicious. And this; "Same here. Jim’s got what us doctor folk call a trained response. His prostate is hypersensitive. You give that little walnut a push-poke and suddenly it’s Christmas morning."
SO funny I almost died. You, my friend, are most definitely a favorite of mine!
Many a thanks or this tid bit of juicy man ...and Vulcan sexing.
Date: 10/04/2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hah, very interesting story here! I don't typically read the threesome-type-fics, but this one was enjoyable.
And it's good that you use the Vulcan. I like the idea that Spock reverts to his native language when his controls slip. It worked well, I think. :)
That being said, you did quite well with the Vulcan grammar, but I think it may go more like this:
You are heaven - "Nam-tor du Ap-Lau"
I have found meaning in you - "Ki'afer-tor nash-veh svi'du lof"
I am lost - "Nam-tor nash-veh pakik"
But like I said, you did really well with the language. Just a few words out-of-order, and technically, it probably still would have been understandable to a Vulcan.
(Using your own sentiment, "Go a head, point and laugh." XD I know I'm getting rather pathetic when I start going grammar-nazi over a made-up language.)
But anyway, fun story. XD Spock and McCoy thought they bickered before... They're definitely going to be fighting over Jim now. Poor Starfleet and the rest of the Bridge Crew. And also Scotty, at the end of the story. XD He's going to work hard to reroute the ventilations or something, unless he wants to continue to use it for gossip.