Date: 11/07/2010 6:12 PM Title: No One Else
I love your take on Pon Farr. Probably one of my favs even if it was short.
I would actually love to read a series you write revolving around your version of pon farr and the inner struggle Spock goes through.
Date: 10/19/2010 2:13 AM Title: No One Else
I really enjoyed reading your less graphic pon farr story. It was more about the emotions and physical/mind comfort for Spock than the violent sex - even though you let us know what happened, we didn't have to endure it all.
Date: 10/17/2010 10:12 AM Title: No One Else
I really enjoyed this! I'm always a sucker for a good Pon Farr story, and I liked the spin you put on this one - of Spock leaving it just that little bit too late. Minimal dialogue and pure sensation was another nice device usage, and I like that you went into enough detail without it going over the top.
This part in particular really jumped out at me - just lovely stuff:
Pain? Even as he rejoiced in the love and welcome, Spock tried to move closer. Without stopping either of his movements, he pressed his mouth against the mouth beneath him. It was no kiss, just a resting of lips against lips; an instinct response to try to soothe.
A pair of hands slid down his hot back and he arched into them even as he continued his desperate seek of release. Finally, finally it came to him seconds later. T'hy'la had brought him this, and with the release, love absorbed Spock.
Thanks so much for sharing!