Date: 10/30/2010 3:03 AM Title: The Descent
Spock is so unlike himself..it is frightening...to dispose of Christine in that manner...and sadness that he must let Jim go again...again love can drive you to madness and Spock has certainly shown it here....
Very interesting piece..thanks for sharing.
Thanks for reading and taking the time for feedback! I felt like Spock's actions, horrible as they were, still made sense. I think he would do something so awful for Jim. It's like Spock, and unlike him as well.
Date: 10/28/2010 7:19 AM Title: The Fall
I think you've truly accomplished here what you had intended--to harken back to the days of fanzines, when fanon did not overwhelm a story, and fan authors seemed more free to devise original plots and characterisations. Your Spock seems the natural victim of the consequences of too much scientific and esoteric knowledge, and I have no problems seeing him re-cast as Dr. Frankenstein. Your McCoy and Chapel, too, seem fully developed characters, rather than mere side-lines to the K/S action. All in all, I love what you've done here, and I can't wait to see the resolution to this cliff-hanger. Thank you for posting!
Thank you so much! I'm really glad that came through.
Date: 10/28/2010 2:43 AM Title: The Fall
Having read the Frankenstein group, I can see it here! I love what you did!
Spocko has gone loco! Not totally, for it seems his work has rendered fruit.
What will happen now? Where was Chapel during the storm?
And why do I keep thinking Pet Sematary?
Lets see if Jim's katra made it whole to the body, and if the body can hold itself together long enough.
Thank you! Stay tuned . . . :-D
Date: 10/27/2010 7:54 PM Title: The Fall
I never read Frankenstein or seen the movie but know pretty much what happened. Spock loved Jim so much that there was nothing he wouldn't do to bring him back. I wish your story was not complete...it truly had an eerie ending. What of Christine now.....but I know that that wasn't really the point of the story.
McCoy said it best in Requiem of Methuselah..
You'll never know what love can drive a man to do....
HE KNOWS DOCTOR, HE KNOWS................. thanks for your story brilliant...
Thank you so much! It would be great to end it there, BUT I really wanted to go into the aftermath of that. Stay tuned -- I'll be posting the rest in the next couple of days.