Date: 11/12/2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love that finale! The mistletoe covering the ceiling and a rather bold Spock, amused at Jim's astonishment and going for what he wants. I thought the rest of the fic showed Jim too flustered and uncomfortable at simply describing the tradition of mistletoe and touching Spock's hand to be truly believable though, and I wished there had been a little more buildup to give it more impact. But then, that I love long detailed fics is MY probem :). It was a cute story.