Date: 11/16/2013 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I never would have expected a slave-fic to be so thoroughly sweet and caring, so intense in the hot scenes as well as in the gentle undercurrent of growing love. I trust you can write a great story for every even so unusual setting.
Date: 05/11/2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I just found this one.... hot and brilliant!
(Remember how I said I would have time to read all your stories now? Be afraid, be very afraid!).
I was surprised to find you had written what was described to me as PWP, but I thought the plot, although simple, was certainly there. And there's always that line to be drawn between 'porn' and 'brilliant described lovemaking.' This was certainly the latter.
Date: 03/11/2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Only Jim Kirk could fall in love doing his duty to protect a fellow officer. It was a wonder to see that cynical heart get cracked completely open and all the hard edges rubbed off, literally, by the hands of an inexperienced Vulcan.
Quite romantic to the end.
Date: 01/29/2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was daggone good! I couldn't believe that the ol' "Aliens made us do it" thing worked out but it did. I think my favorite part was when Jim, JIM, fell in love and was thinking he was going to get his heart broken. We don't get to see a vulnerable!Jim that often, and I like it. You are quite an accomplished writer, I'm going through your stories now and I like them.
Thank you so much. I think Jim is a bit vulnerable--he tries to hide it, but a lot of the swagger and bluff sexiness is masking loneliness. Glad you're enjoying my stories.
Date: 12/30/2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Upon reading the summary for this story, I very nearly shyed away from it. To me, it sounded like a shameless PWP, with a side of dubcon and a creepy voyeur leering in the distance. I'm not a fan of any of the above three. However, I was also aware that there was a chance that this could be something worth reading, having been aware that you were obviously a celebrated writer in the fandom. And you know, for something that is very nearly almost ALL sex, you managed to convey such longing, passion and love that instead of feeling like a version of that creepy voyeur, it made me feel a happiness and by the time I got to the last words of your story, I had tears in my eyes from how beautifully you portrayed their love. Very well done, this was well worth the risk.
Why, thank you. That is very high praise. I am certainly glad you took the chance; I was not intending anything creepy here, but rather a genuine exploration of Jim facing his desires and Spock facing his fears. Glad it worked for you.