Date: 02/03/2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
That thud you heard was me hitting the floor. That was incredible. So hilariously uncomfortable for Jim at the start... to kind of sweet... to, well.... "thud". :~) Loved it. I think I'm addicted to your writing.
I hope you didn't break anything when you hit the floor, lol. Thank you for reading, and don't worry. It's a free and harmless addiction, unless I try to rule the world and co-opt an army from my readers. Hmmmm....
Date: 02/03/2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is so adorable. I love Jim's brain babbling, and the way he backs himself into a corner. Good thing Spock took advantage of that to get all those feelings out into the open - sneaky Vulcan.
Great job, as always. :D
Date: 02/03/2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely! I love that you respond to my challenges because you do them so well! You're a great, prolific writer and that is awesome.
I love the addition of "He would have looked at a gorgon if it meant he didn’t have to look into Spock’s eye". So clever. (I laughed so much cause I'm watching the episode while I read. XD)
Thank you very much. I liked the idea a lot. :)