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Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2012 4:35 PM Title: KS Valentine Vignette

sweet end.



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Thank you :-)

Reviewer: putigress2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2011 1:56 AM Title: KS Valentine Vignette

Gorgeous.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: ladyguenievre Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 10:57 AM Title: KS Valentine Vignette

Aw! This was a really nice and sensitive vignette. Jim's wistfulness when he gave Spock the gift after Spock told Valentine's day was illogical, Spock caressing the rose and remembering his mom...and especially how it showed how attentive Jim was to his lover's most fervent desires, beyond what Spock will admit to. I loved that discussion about needs and wants that lead from one thing to another - something deep, touching and sweet that turned to passion - and your last line was gorgeous: " in being unwrapped, Spock became a Valentine’s gift of his own." Such nice wording, and I'm sure it's the best Valentine's Day gift Jim could ask for :). Thank you for sharing!



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Thank you very much!!

Reviewer: mdevile Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 6:25 AM Title: KS Valentine Vignette

This was so sweet and beautifully atmospheric.



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Thank you :-)

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